i love the art, and as others have said, you did a great job of building a setting and characters and making the player feel connected to them in a very short amount of time!! you should be proud! it's simple but really really effective
the angst,, THE ANGST !!! this was soooo good despite being short. so well done, and it got me tearing right at the end T T !!!
it sure is painful to know that Zev, and the mc had feelings for each other, but hid it because of their rivalry,, that hurts my heart in SUCH a good way </3
the emotions, the expressions, the dialogue, everything was so on point ! wish to see a longer, and deeper story about Zev and us, that'd be such an amazing prequel :0 !
amazing job, i would love to see more of your works, dear dev !! <3 much love to you !
the way you managed to make me fall in love with this edgy loser in no more than 10 minutes is genuinely fucking amazing. with less than a 1000 words, one sprite but multiple expressive faces, it told so much... genuinely wonderful.
Such a short game but still amazing nonetheless!!! I loved it so much. I especially liked the small detail where we see earth getting closer or farther depending on the choice made. Thank you for this wonderful game!
HOW?? HOW WERE YOU ABLE TO MAKE ME WEEP FOR ZEV?? I HAVE ONLY KNOWN THIS MAN IN A MATTER OR MINUTES BUT I WOULD LEAP OVER TO HIS MECH AND HOLD HIM--
I love how you were able to mix in their backstory in just a few minutes, how Zev expressed both fondness and hate towards MC and how both of them, despite being on opposite ends, still respect and yearn each other (god, those rival animes are flashing back).
When I got the endings of Zev dying alone, it felt like a piece of me was gonna shatter. Even if MC had to return without Zev I know without a doubt in my soul that a piece of them broke apart when Zev died and they had to abandon him. SO WHEN I GOT THE ENDING WHEN MC DEFIED WHAT ZEV THOUGHT OF AND RUSHED AFTER ZEV MY HEART CRIED IN HAPPINESS!
That little epilogue!??!?! That brief moment of domestic dynamic between the two?! My dear developer I nearly cried in that moment. I am broken. I am sobbing. The sight of Zev blushing and crying-- Baby, I would gladly become a traitor so long as you're not alone.
It's just-- So well done for the time limit, word limit, limited assets, and so on. Absolutely amazing work, I adore it!
Gotta say, I really did love this short little blurb of a game. I'm also a fan of rivalmances, and I just wanted to hug our boy so bad in that moment. Very sweet. Agonizingly short. <3
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we need more visual novels with men on the verge of death 🙏
re piola
This is so good! I loved both endings and even if it was a short story, I had many feelings. Thank you so much <3
esta chido
I NEED TO SAVE HIM IM GOING FERAL, PLEASE MAKE A DIFFERENT ENDING
Gorgeous artwork and a lovely but tragic glimpse into these character’s lives. Also war crimes!!
Wish I could have a even longer full Visual novel of this. Would pay for such a immensely well told idea.
raise exception possible infinite loop
Very beautiful graphics! The story is so sad though, leaves you wanting to know more about the past these two characters shared </3
i love the art, and as others have said, you did a great job of building a setting and characters and making the player feel connected to them in a very short amount of time!! you should be proud! it's simple but really really effective
😭😭😭
this was so good i'm WAILING SOBBING SCREAMING
Nobody:
My Mind: Let it die let it die-
NVM I TAKE IT BACK OMG- 😨
OKAY NVM I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK- LET HIM DIE-
OKAY NVM I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK BECAUSE HIS SMILE IS KINDA-
NVM I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK WHAT I TAKE BACK JUST FINISH HIM OFF 💀
reading this was so fun for absoutely no reason
I'm sobbing sm rn, IM GONNA GO WRITE SOMETHING SWEET AND WHOLESOME TO PATCH IT UP
LET ME READ IT TOO, IM GONNA CRY
OMG I TOTALLY FORGOT ABOUT WRITING IT, I MIGHT TRY DOING IT NOW SINCE YOU MADE ME REMEMBER THIS GAME (sobbing)
OMG IF U HAVE IT DONE I WANT TO READ IT TOO🥺🥺🥺🤧🤧🤧💗💗💗😭😭😭
REMEMBER!!1!!!1!11!! MWAHAHHAHHA (IM SORRY BUT PLEASE DO IT AND SHOW IT TO ME PLEASE)
Zev's adorable blushing face AHHHHH how bittersweet 😭
Me: One last VN then I'll sleep
The VN:
Really though... WHYYY (༎ຶ ෴ ༎ຶ)
NOOOOOO WHY WOULD I FELL INLOVE WITH A FREAKING DYING MAN IN 5 MINUTES AND START BAWLING WHEN I REALIZED WE WOULD BE NOTHING MORE THAN WHAT WE WERE 😭🥺
Pls i need more of this sweetheart 🙏🙏
"WE WOULD BE NOTHING MORE THAN WHAT WE WERE" WTFFFFFF WHO ALLOWED YOU TO SAY THAT????TT
I feel the same way awwwwwww🥺🥺😭😭😭😭
this hurt way more than i thought
I HAVE ALREADY FALLEN IN LOVE WITH THIS MAN PLEASE I NEED HIM PLEASE
This is too short but so gud omg😭
pls i need a full game with his backstory and a romance route T-T
+1
CREATOR PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER SERIES IM ON MY KNEES😭
its too short noooTT
I am so sad. I'm never recovering. 10/10.
how to fall in love again and again with Zev and getting your heart destroyed every time.
the angst,, THE ANGST !!! this was soooo good despite being short. so well done, and it got me tearing right at the end T T !!!
it sure is painful to know that Zev, and the mc had feelings for each other, but hid it because of their rivalry,, that hurts my heart in SUCH a good way </3
the emotions, the expressions, the dialogue, everything was so on point ! wish to see a longer, and deeper story about Zev and us, that'd be such an amazing prequel :0 !
amazing job, i would love to see more of your works, dear dev !! <3 much love to you !
These must've been horrendous war crimes.
short and adorable as hell im bawling
short, sweet and heart breaking you really made a jem here with Zev it all just made me tear up,
soooo....did anybody else cry? just me?
I love this so much kdjoawjd 🥲
the way you managed to make me fall in love with this edgy loser in no more than 10 minutes is genuinely fucking amazing. with less than a 1000 words, one sprite but multiple expressive faces, it told so much... genuinely wonderful.
Such a short game but still amazing nonetheless!!! I loved it so much. I especially liked the small detail where we see earth getting closer or farther depending on the choice made. Thank you for this wonderful game!
I would love to see more of these two!
how did you manage to make me fall in love with this story when i only know the characters for 5 minutes ?????? this is so amazing i love this game
Oh my god. Oh my god. I need more of them--
HOW?? HOW WERE YOU ABLE TO MAKE ME WEEP FOR ZEV?? I HAVE ONLY KNOWN THIS MAN IN A MATTER OR MINUTES BUT I WOULD LEAP OVER TO HIS MECH AND HOLD HIM--
I love how you were able to mix in their backstory in just a few minutes, how Zev expressed both fondness and hate towards MC and how both of them, despite being on opposite ends, still respect and yearn each other (god, those rival animes are flashing back).
When I got the endings of Zev dying alone, it felt like a piece of me was gonna shatter. Even if MC had to return without Zev I know without a doubt in my soul that a piece of them broke apart when Zev died and they had to abandon him. SO WHEN I GOT THE ENDING WHEN MC DEFIED WHAT ZEV THOUGHT OF AND RUSHED AFTER ZEV MY HEART CRIED IN HAPPINESS!
That little epilogue!??!?! That brief moment of domestic dynamic between the two?! My dear developer I nearly cried in that moment. I am broken. I am sobbing. The sight of Zev blushing and crying-- Baby, I would gladly become a traitor so long as you're not alone.
It's just-- So well done for the time limit, word limit, limited assets, and so on. Absolutely amazing work, I adore it!
NOOOOOOOOO ZEVVVVVV!!!! (really good yet short game)
Gotta say, I really did love this short little blurb of a game. I'm also a fan of rivalmances, and I just wanted to hug our boy so bad in that moment. Very sweet. Agonizingly short. <3
my favorite game eva