This was really good! I love rivals-to-lovers, so this was an excellent treat even with the bad ending in the mix. Also! The UI was so amazingly integrated! Absolutely amazing work <3
I had to fight my phone to hell and back trying to get the game to load and start up, and I'm really glad I did! The ambience is perfect, the character design is gorgeous, and the situation and dialogue made me tear up. I never have the heart to play out angsty "bad" routes so i can't give any feedback on that, but the "good" route is just so sweet and I'm so relieved everything ended up good for them (Trying my hardest to avoid using spoilery language here lol). I think my favorite part was when Zev finally realized that we weren't about to give up on him. Just "Oh. wow. You're serious? You're actually NOT gonna finish this, and are instead going to risk your life saving mine??" I just love that trope and you executed it wonderfully.
Overall I loved it and I'll be on the look out for any future projects you take on!
dude the atmosphere in this is UNREAL im kind of obsessed???? the art and ambiance of the audio and everything its just so.... bleak. and so fitting for what we're being given. its impressive that you managed to sew so much into something not even 1000 words long
LOVED THE UI and even when the time with Zev are short, i somehow already want to see more of him. One ending is sweet and cute the other is bittersweet with angst. I thoroughly enjoyed my short time here. Thanks for making this <33
Oh my gooooood, this is SO good!!!! The art is AMAZING, the UI is really neat and fitting, and I LOVED the story so much!!! I'm a big sucker for rivals to lovers trope so this was a treat <3 <3 <3
I'm looking forward to more of your projects, I loved Curio Compendium too!!
It's a short story but i've already feel so sad about it and Zev. (ㄒ- ㄒ) Every expression is vivid enough to touch me. Hope them can always get the good end
That one ending, hehe. I also like the whole point of the setting and story in addition to this friends(or acquaintances) to enemies to- 's trope. When I thought of it again, the story is quite long in my feeling, we got the backstory and they got to sort out feelings. You made good use of those under 1k words, good job! (Also there are so many expressions of Zev, I love that.)
Really creative GUI, looks neat as well as the character, the story was surprisingly good for a less than 1K words game, I actually got invested in this rivalry/friendship/romance, if you close your eyes a little bit you may as well be watching an episode of X mecha anime. Zev definitely deserved better!
In space, no one can hear you fall in love with your rival...
The game looks great, and I'll admit I loved the ending I labeled "power of love" in my mind, haha! But overall, the rivalry was interesting in both routes! Also, the GUI and the art were very polished too, and great to look at! Congrats!!
Yeah but what if we spent years fighting and one-upping each other, constantly rivaling each other until we were forced to fight a war in mech suits. Soon enough, we find ourselves in space, thousands of miles away from the Earth's surface as one of us is mortally injured... the winner of our battle calls the other, and we chat about years past as we both float away into the starry abyss, together.... jk jk, unless... 😳?
This low-key made me so Flippin sad and empty Idk why. It's like unrequited love :( AHHH WHYYY MUST IT BE THIS WAY I just feel so bad for Zev and the mc so much. I'm no writer but I'd say Zev is a well written character for a game something like this. Zev as a character feels like a person you can understandably empathize with. But like the people he killed- they didn't deserve it, ...probably. He has flaws which makes him feel real or like a person.
The artist of my game told me about the artwork for this one and how impressive it was, so I just had to try it out myself. Not disappointed! :) Definitely one of the best-looking stories this year. And mecha, too? Sign me up! <3
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This is AMAZING!!! The writing hits so hard even for being so short! The art is beautiful to look at & the UI is perfection! I really felt attached even after a few moments. When the call ended and you had made it look as though the ship was genuinely moving, that was incredible!
Art is gorgeous, the expressions are appropriately painful, and the weight of the world is on your shoulders. A quick exchange that says a lot. Perhaps things could be different...beyond the time...but not here, not now. Totally loved this mwah mwah mwah
Somehow this game made me feel so sad for a character I just met in a short amount of time. I want all the best for Zev. The GUI is really cool and I wish I could see more as to how things ended up the way they did. This is a really cool game!!
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I loved it!
esta muy bien, pero tener que traducir todo a español cansa, ¿se podría poner una traducción automática?
I loved this! It'd be so cool if it had a more deep/longer version<3
This was really good! I love rivals-to-lovers, so this was an excellent treat even with the bad ending in the mix. Also! The UI was so amazingly integrated! Absolutely amazing work <3
I had to fight my phone to hell and back trying to get the game to load and start up, and I'm really glad I did! The ambience is perfect, the character design is gorgeous, and the situation and dialogue made me tear up. I never have the heart to play out angsty "bad" routes so i can't give any feedback on that, but the "good" route is just so sweet and I'm so relieved everything ended up good for them (Trying my hardest to avoid using spoilery language here lol). I think my favorite part was when Zev finally realized that we weren't about to give up on him. Just "Oh. wow. You're serious? You're actually NOT gonna finish this, and are instead going to risk your life saving mine??" I just love that trope and you executed it wonderfully.
Overall I loved it and I'll be on the look out for any future projects you take on!
it's so short yet very sweet!! the artstyle and animation is beautiful as always TwT
This was really cool, loved it a lot. The art was very pretty to.
Short, and nice as always, I absolutely love your games.
If only I could have a full visual novel worth of this sort of content. Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! Love it!
adoro amo y todo ;v; obra maestra
bro the artstyle is a MASTERPIECE
dude the atmosphere in this is UNREAL im kind of obsessed???? the art and ambiance of the audio and everything its just so.... bleak. and so fitting for what we're being given. its impressive that you managed to sew so much into something not even 1000 words long
also that UI design is seriously genius jsyk
ZEV! OMG I LOVE HIM 😭😭😭
ZEV!
LOVED THE UI and even when the time with Zev are short, i somehow already want to see more of him. One ending is sweet and cute the other is bittersweet with angst. I thoroughly enjoyed my short time here. Thanks for making this <33
The positive ending is really cute and the other bittersweet ^^
Oh my gooooood, this is SO good!!!! The art is AMAZING, the UI is really neat and fitting, and I LOVED the story so much!!! I'm a big sucker for rivals to lovers trope so this was a treat <3 <3 <3
I'm looking forward to more of your projects, I loved Curio Compendium too!!
It's a short story but i've already feel so sad about it and Zev. (ㄒ- ㄒ) Every expression is vivid enough to touch me. Hope them can always get the good end
That one ending, hehe. I also like the whole point of the setting and story in addition to this friends(or acquaintances) to enemies
to-'s trope. When I thought of it again, the story is quite long in my feeling, we got the backstory and they got to sort out feelings. You made good use of those under 1k words, good job! (Also there are so many expressions of Zev, I love that.)In space, no one can hear you fall in love with your rival...
hes adorable
The game looks great, and I'll admit I loved the ending I labeled "power of love" in my mind, haha! But overall, the rivalry was interesting in both routes! Also, the GUI and the art were very polished too, and great to look at! Congrats!!
Yeah but what if we spent years fighting and one-upping each other, constantly rivaling each other until we were forced to fight a war in mech suits. Soon enough, we find ourselves in space, thousands of miles away from the Earth's surface as one of us is mortally injured... the winner of our battle calls the other, and we chat about years past as we both float away into the starry abyss, together.... jk jk, unless... 😳?
This low-key made me so Flippin sad and empty Idk why. It's like unrequited love :( AHHH WHYYY MUST IT BE THIS WAY I just feel so bad for Zev and the mc so much. I'm no writer but I'd say Zev is a well written character for a game something like this. Zev as a character feels like a person you can understandably empathize with. But like the people he killed- they didn't deserve it, ...probably. He has flaws which makes him feel real or like a person.
I love the characters, love this game 100/10
I can't believe how cute Zev was ngl- I love the art and so every time his face would have a bit of color in it was cute
The artist of my game told me about the artwork for this one and how impressive it was, so I just had to try it out myself. Not disappointed! :) Definitely one of the best-looking stories this year. And mecha, too? Sign me up! <3
Whenever I get to dialogue options I get an error msg, but I can still click and choose whatever I want.
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This was really well made. I found it quite surprising how well you could tell a story in less than 10 minutes. Great job.
This brought me to tears. Seriously. I've only known him for about two minutes, but I love him already.
i want to see him to grow up strong and healthy
only 2 endings but i am struggling❤️, apart from my stupidity its an amazing game so nice it made me tear up
Absolutely gorgeous art, unique use of the O2A2 format, and a surprisingly poignant story for the short wordcount. Excellent work. Congrats!
This is AMAZING!!! The writing hits so hard even for being so short! The art is beautiful to look at & the UI is perfection!
I really felt attached even after a few moments. When the call ended and you had made it look as though the ship was genuinely moving, that was incredible!
What a fantastic game! I loved it! 10/10 <3
Also the user interface (?) is BRILLIANT
So so SO good I had to make an account so I could... I don't even know what more I can do with vs without an account, but I had to do it.
So yes, to put it lightly, I loved this game
Art is gorgeous, the expressions are appropriately painful, and the weight of the world is on your shoulders. A quick exchange that says a lot. Perhaps things could be different...beyond the time...but not here, not now. Totally loved this mwah mwah mwah
Somehow this game made me feel so sad for a character I just met in a short amount of time. I want all the best for Zev. The GUI is really cool and I wish I could see more as to how things ended up the way they did. This is a really cool game!!
This was such a touching space opera!!!! love all the creative choices you made
10000/10 A++++ A+++ A+++ A++
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