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I played your games (a while ago) and was wondering if I could work with you as a translator? I'd really like to translate them into my native. 





Of course, if you don't want to, that's fine. Enjoy the rest of your day ^-^





(Wow, I'm proud. I rarely manage to keep things short.)

Before playing!:

Seems like a sad game, not sure why people are crying but im interested..

Good mood, excited for content

Seems like some romance rivalry game, cute!!!

Hope I like it

I ended up with him first try but damn, the second ending did not have to... bro

poor zev. that hurt. fym "all by himself". that was so upsetting..

first run, very good ending, this is peak, thank you for making this masterpiece.

i saw the comments while the game is loading and i am confused like what cry. so i js think it’s js that it’s probably a romance game so i will reply to myself to update u guys what my raction is~~

hey… so.. i did not like this game…is there any other endings where i can be with zev forever?… i feel weak while playing this.

This game was very short, but I must admit that it made me want to cry 🥲

I really love this short game! I even ended up with Zev on my first try <3

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replayed this after first playing it 9 months ago and it's still one of my favorites. i love zev, and i love the way you can understand the dynamic between the two of you so well in such a short game. the atmosphere of the game is so amazing, you immediately feel immersed.

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I literally do not understand what kind of game this is. o_O

Or who the love interest is, assuming there even is one.

it's a short visual novel about an encounter with your rival in space

SPOILERS:

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there is a route/ending where the two of you end up together

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That was extremely general and vague. lol

But thank you.

You may want to add -something- to explain what the game is about on your page tho.
Most people tend to give pages with zero description a quick glance and ignore it, deciding it's not worth the effort to try something they don't even know what is.

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i'm not the dev lol, i just saw this comment at the top when i went to leave one myself.

the dev describes it as "Mecha Anime Rivalry" which is a pretty famous manga and anime genre with some rivalry mixed in. since the game is so short, they can't give a long description due to spoilers.

you can always check the "more information" tab and check the tags to get some idea of what to expect btw!

also seeing as the game had 400+ reviews which only reflect a small portion of plays/downloads, i wouldn't say it has been ignored 

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Ah. My bad. You did sound like one. lol

I have literally never heard of it.
But then again, I am not a fan of SciFi.
(At most I like Star Wars. Mostly the older movie and the online game, and I always root for the Sith. lol)

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even though i want to do the other ending, i cant make other choices even the game is short im attached to Zev to the point where i cant help but die(?) with him

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It was sweet. I like how you use their dialogue to reveal the past, without it feeling forced.

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It was short but I still almost cried- Ugh I hate crying so much, I'm way too emotional!! 

Made me wanna cry, I could imagine a anime out of it

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I would play a longer game about these two

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THE DIALOGUE WAS SO PERFECT ESPECIALLY WITH HOW IT NATURALLY TOLD EVERYTHING FROM THE ENVIRONMENT TO THEIR RELATIONSHIP TO WHAT INEVITABLY HAPPENED I'M IN SHAMBLES OVER THE "CONTINUED" CALL WAHHH

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i love the little detail how earth getting closer/further depending what you choose

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they are such cuties i like both endings but the 2 one more

amazingly minimal, sometimes less is all you need to make an enjoyable game tell a wonderful story! ♥ ♥

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I enjoyed it so much! it was so amazing and very interesting experience. I liked both endings and loved the dialogues and this game is in my top 3!

he keeps repeating the same word's....

ooh, the presentation is top notch! when it was shown as a screen over the ui already being shown, my mind was blown.

woah, there's a happy ending too! nice little bow on it all ^^

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I was shipping them up until I heard that I had a family and was like.."wait I have wives and kids? well oh f, I change my mind".

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family doesn't necessarily mean wife and kids lmao, i interpreted it as parents/siblings/etc.

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Idk why that was my thought at first, 😭😭😭Anyway, Really appreciate the clarification.

I had played til the end and confirm we are single.

great game 10/10

<3

Thank you for such wonderful content! Although the work is very short, I can feel his charm from it!

nice short story that plays on the trope of homoerotic rivals in mecha anime. very cute, really beautiful art, loved it. can't wait to see what you guys make next :D

We need more thanthat ToT

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spilers(?)

how do i get the other ending? (the one i got is where we take off and he dies)

Zev is da best, cool work. I NEED MORE ZEV

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Love the game so much! The atomosphere of the story and the characters are so impressive. The way you express made me, a beginner of sci-fi,  feel the charm of if.

Your work is so great that I wanna share with more friends. May I ask if you have any intention of adding other languages into this work? I'd be happy to help with Chinese localization if you'd like! If not, may I have your permission to translate this work into Chinese? I promise I will credit you and put a link back to your site. 

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Thank you for playing! I don’t have any intention to implement other languages at the moment because of time constraints in real life, but feel free to translate!

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The good (?) ending seriously had me smiling from ear to ear. Also the short scene after that makes me want a second part to this TT I want to see the mc and Zev happy together.

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gahhh this got me really emotional! both endings are written so well and the art is really engaging. the menu especially is very unique! awesome work <3

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WHATT WHERE IS THE LORE?! I NEED TO KNOW THE STORY RN also WHO IS THAT FINE MANNN?

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Awww this is such a cute little game! I love it.

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What a perfect story!! There's no doubt Zev looks so erotic and sexy.🥺🥺🥺🥺He's soooo good. The story is very interesting both in terms of plot and character design, and there is a lot to explore. I want to keep learning about them. Oh, Zev is so cute... 🥺🥺🥺Hope there can be a sequel, I love the author's work so much, in order to post this comment just registered itch number!! I hope to see more from the author!!😭😭😭💗💗💗

(I'm sorry I used a translator

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CRY😭😭😭I WANT TO READ SMTH SWEET PLZ😭😭😭OMG IS THERE ANY SEQUEL?????

I love this game, great work! Looking forward to more of your work!

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we need more visual novels with men on the verge of death 🙏

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re piola

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This is so good! I loved both endings and even if it was a short story, I had many feelings. Thank you so much <3

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esta chido 

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I NEED TO SAVE HIM IM GOING FERAL, PLEASE MAKE A DIFFERENT ENDING

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